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How to write an effective E-mail
With the
advent of technology, the way we communicate is changed and still it is going
to change. Most of the times, we communicate through verbal communication.
However, written communication, since the origin of hieroglyphs in Egypt 4000
years ago, has not lost its importance.
In business world and public
administration after lots of verbal communication, things are eventually
reduced in writing which removes any uncertainty and confusion. In case of any dispute
or loss of “organisational memory”, written communication would have the final
word. Most importantly, emails (for that matter any digital records) can be
produced as an evidence in a court if certain conditions are complied with as
per Indian Evidence Act 1872, read with Information Technology Act 2000.
The use of
email is increasing day by day in formal communication replacing the “hardcopy”
to a large extent. Speed, low cost, easy retrieval, multiple “dispatch” at a
time (CC, BCC), forwarding, attachments, savings on paper, etc are some of many
advantages the email has over snail mail. No wonder why email is becoming so
popular as a channel of communication all over the world.
An email
could be said a hybrid offspring of century old art of letter writing and
modern technology of internet. As such, a few aspects of letter writing are
seen to have been diluted in email. With spread of internet, our skill of
formal writing is unfortunately eroding day by day. Writing an email which
engages the attention of the receiver and evokes expected response is an
important skill. Here are a few tips on what it takes to write an effective
email:
- Collect the information (and sometime records also) on the subject matter and thoroughly appreciate the facts and purpose of writing (rather say sending) the email.
- Identify “ To” addressee (the main recipients to whom it is to be sent) which is generally easy but identifying “CC” and “BCC” addressee needs application of mind. As endorsing an email by CC and BCC is quite easy, we are tempted to distribute it to unrelated parties, and some time indiscriminately. We must bear in mind that in spite of all precautions, digital matter has great propensity to reach anywhere.
- Subject line is very important. It is like a visage of a person or a facade of a building. It should sound attractive but also should comprehend the essence of the email. A “complete sentence” as subject line is not a good idea. Prefer a succinct phrase, e.g. rather than Please make travel arrangement for my visit to Head Office write Travel arrangement for visit to Head Office. The subject is very important if the email is sent to an unknown recipient or it is sent for sales promotion. A well phrased subject line prompts the recipient to open the email.
- The content of the body of the email starts with salutations/greetings. An appropriate salutation will make the recipient feel like read the content of the body. Depending upon the official relation or familiarity with recipient, salutation words/phrase is to be chosen. Do not choose words which might offend the recipient or indicates that you are not careful in salutation. In official email Dear Sir/Dear Madam (any one when the gender is known) or Dear Sir/Madam (when the gender is not known) is considered an appropriate salutation. When the recipient is of equal or lower in rank, Dear Mr (Surname) can also be used. Mind the spelling of surname. In salutation, do not use the words: To whomsoever it may concern, Dear All, Hi there!, Hello, Hi Guys, etc in a formal email. Any of these will be considered perfunctory by the recipient.
- You can also add a line: Kind: Attention ____________ ______ , particularly when the email is sent to a big organisation and you know the person by whom the matter is being dealt with. However, it is also to be borne in mind that some employees are averse to such marking in their name.
- Introduce your organisation if the recipient unaware about the same.
- Now the most crucial part of the email begins, i.e. the main body of the email:
Give reference of the /trailing email/previous email/
correspondence/conversation, if any and
making it a stepping stone, state more facts and further developments, if any,
in the matter. If there is no previous reference to be discussed/quoted,
introduce the matter with facts and why the issue has come up. Be brief. Mind
well, brevity should not be at the cost of clarity because what clarity you
have about the matter as a “man on the spot”, the same level of clarity should
not be presumed from the receiver.
Explore the possibility whether the presentation of the matter in
tabular format will help the recipient to comprehend the matter quickly. Supporting
documents should, making an allusion (mention) to this effect in the body
itself, be furnished as attachment rather than narrating them in full details
in the body of the email. The body should be divided into 2 – 3 paragraphs as
per the main focus / purport of the matter to be presented in the paragraph.
The ultimate aim of writing the email is to get
the receiver convinced to initiate certain actions and induce him/her to do the
same. The penultimate (the last but one) paragraph of the main body of the
email will present this request (also called submission). This paragraph
generally begins with one of such signpost phrases e.g. In view of the above,
we request/advise you to do so and so forth
or We, therefore, request/advise you to do so and so forth.
- Closing (concluding) the email is also equally important as this last portion will be attracting the reader’s attention most. The closing line should be in consonance with the gist of the matter in the main body and the position of the receiver and sender. Generally any one of following lines go in the closing part:
- Looking forward to hearing from you soon.
- Looking to your favourable response /
response.
- Should you need more information, please let us
know.
- Thanking you in anticipation.
-Please keep us posted with the developments.
-We assure you to resolve the issue in due
course.
- I look forward to hearing from you soon
9.
Expression of gratitude / appreciation (just above the and Signature)
A customary phrase is added,
particularly when the recipient is in higher position or
not so familiar with the sender.
These phrases could be one of the of the following as per
“circumstances” of the email:
·
Thanking
you
·
Thanks
for your time
·
Thanking
you in anticipation
·
Thanks
for acceding to my/our request
·
Thanks
(sounds very terse, should be avoided for seniors)
·
Thanks
for consideration
·
Thanks
for kind consideration
·
I/We
appreciate your help and thank you a lot
·
Thanks
and Regards / Thanks and Kind Regards/ Warm Regards (When you want to show
respect to the receiver)
·
With
Best Regards
·
Keep
it up (to encourage the juniors while responding to a good work done)
·
This
could not have been possible but for your kind support / guidance /
co-operation
10.
Signature (also called Valediction / Sign Off), Name, Mob No., E mail ID
There are elaborate rules when you sign
a letter. However, in the case of email, norms are
“Dynamic” : following the full
set rules as followed in the case of a letter or just putting –
(Your Name) or vibrant and vivid automatically added Signature
Block (which itself could be a good topic for full length blog) with
photographs,
Companylogo, Product Banner, etc. However,
formality should be followed
when the email receiver is a senior person or a valued customer.
when the email receiver is a senior person or a valued customer.
Yours faithfully, and after single line space, your name. Add your Mobile Number,
Designation, Company Name, website of the Company.
Designation, Company Name, website of the Company.
11.
Spell check the email. Do it carefully as Spell Check function of the
system can not be relied upon fully.
12.
Format the email properly : Indent, Line spacing, Font type, size, bold, italics, colour etc.
Do not use ALL CAPITALS for
Do not use ALL CAPITALS for
entire sentence. Do not use fancy and / or cursive fonts. Use bold, italics,
colour sparingly.
Compare
your past 2 – 3 emails in the backdrop of what have been discussed above and
check yourself as to how do you fare.
The
blogger can be reached at gnpatel@gujaratinfotech.com.
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Wednesday, June 26, 2019
10 MANTRAS TO MAKE A BETTER FIRST IMPRESSION THAT LASTS LONGER
You never
get a second chance to make a first impression.
- Andrew Grant (British
Author)
First
impression is the last impression. How much time one takes to form the first
impression of the other person? A study by researchers says, about seven
seconds. Sad but true. “Registration” of your impression in perceiver’s mind
takes only few second but it lasts for a long period. How the other person
interacts with you largely depends on the impression you make on his mind. What
are the factors go into making your first impression that gets wrought in the
perceiver’s mind? For how long first
impression remains registered in perceiver’s mind? For a very long time. At times it might happen that you
yourself are indifferent to your own first impression which other persons might
carry but your near and dear, peers or boss would not allow you such latitude.
They will prevail upon you as to how to dress, behave and conduct so that their
own impression is not spoiled! This is enough to drive the point home: Making a
Better First Impression that lasts longer is very important for everybody
irrespective of one’s age and status. Some people quote the example of great
personalities as to how indifferent they were about their impression. My answer
to them is, “Yes, you can also follow these eminent personalities but only
after you achieve the greatness they have achieved”.
Factors those
make your First Impression:
1. Punctuality:
If you are
going to meet a person face to face, take the appointment in advance. Reach in
time as per the appointed time. If you are not able to reach in time, inform
accordingly. Request for re-scheduling the appointment should be avoided as far
as possible.
2. Dress:
An English
idiom says, “Don’t judge a book by its cover” but contrary to the idiom, man intuitively judges the person by
dress. What dress is best suited depends upon multiple factors: occasion,
status, age, season, etc. When on official duty, wear formal dress. Outward
appearance is the main cue that prompts the other person to make or mar your
first impression, even before you speak a word or move a step.
3. Personal Grooming:
If you shave, well shaven face is a basic thing. If you are
sporting a beard, keep it trimmed and tidy. Good oral hygiene. Ornaments? Only
a finger ring or better none. No overt tattoo, preferably no tattoo. For
females, light make up and minimum ornaments as per the applicable custom are
advisable.
4. Smile:
Smile is the cheapest but most precious ornament a man can
wear. Flash a smile as soon as you have eye contact. It pre-empts the other
person’s negative though process about your first impression.
5. Handshaking:
Shake hand with enthusiasm and a broad smile. If handshaking
is not practical, greet with the words Good Morning, Good Afternoon, etc. If
you are knowing (which is desirable) the surname, address the person with
surname and with or without suffixing Sir/Madam (depending upon the hierarchy)
while greeting the person. Presenting a bouquet on special occasions is also in
fitness of the things. In a social gathering, elderly people deserve more
respect irrespective of culture or country. In India, greeting them with folded
hands and saying Namaste is a usual practice and if you are holding them in
high respect, bowing and touching their feet is a sure shot.
6. Conversation:
Confine to relevant points. Speak clearly with confidence. Establish
eye contact while talking. Speak at an audible pitch. Be a good listener. In
case of difference of opinion, raise your width and depth of arguments
supported with logic and data and not the voice. Use appropriate business /
technical terminology which will reflect your professional knowledge. For
meaningful conversation, get yourself ready beforehand with facts and figures. Use
the language with which you both are comfortable. Remain attentive. Do not play
with any object e.g. button of your shirt, wrist-watch, mobile, hair, etc. After
the conversation is over, summarize the action points and note down them. If
you need the visiting card or contact number, ask for it with politeness. Talk
politely irrespective of your position. Courtesy begets courtesy. While talking
over phone or mobile, be extra careful as the person at the other end will
judge you only on your “audio” because your no visual cues are available.
7. Positivity:
Talk with positive approach. It will kindle positivity in
your counter-part. Talking positive does not mean only saying good things and
avoiding conflict of opinion. It is your mental approach to the problem. Say
glass is half full rather than saying half empty.
8. Humility:
Do not boast about your knowledge and achievements. If the other person is appreciating your
knowledge/achievements, thank him and pass on the credit to your colleagues and
seniors.
9. Gestures and
Postures:
Avoid awkward gestures and postures while sitting, standing,
walking or patting. Gestures and postures with “who cares” approach send
negative signals about your personality.
10. Magic words:
Use Please, Thank you, Sorry, Excuse me, Pardon me, May I,
Could you please, OK, Hello Sir, Hello Madam, etc as and when etiquette
demands. These power-packed tiny words help you a lot to make a better First
Impression.
Hope, this reading must have made a very good First Impression about me in your mind but it will not help you to make that of yours until you constantly, consistently and consciously strive to internalize the 10 Commandments discussed above. Anyway, Good Luck for your determination to take a leaf from a person whose first impression has impressed you most.
The reader can reach the blogger at gnpatel@gujaratinfotech.com.
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